Stop Grinding Hogs!

Everybody's Working for the Weekend Edition

I know I said that I'd not be "working" weekends, but in a desperate ploy to keep you all interested I thought that I'd give you a bonus song. This song was not written today and has been recorded over a few different sessions. It is indeed still a work in progress. I want to change the lyrics in the last verse as it sounds a bit clumsy to me and I want to totally redo the vocals. Any comments or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for listening.
Enjoy your weekend

Barely working telephone

Incongruent, it’s how you live your lives
Leave you choking on the truth
When she’s coughing up her lies
And I can’t show you a better way to shine
If you don’t come out from the dark

Flash her picture like it’s answering the “whys? ”
With the curve of her figure
And the sparkle in her eyes
But I can’t show you a better way to drive
If you cant take it out of park

Every time I talk to you
Sounds like I’m hearing you
Through the wrong end of a barely working telephone
Every time I look at you
It seems like you’re fading
Away from the person that I used to know

Smile like an idiot
You just don’t realize
You can give her everything
But still she’ll sleep with other guys
And you wont listen now
So I wont even try
To help you save you from yourself

Every time I talk to you
Sounds like I’m hearing you
Through the wrong end of a barely working telephone
Every time I look at you
It seems like you’re fading
Away from the person that I used to know

RW